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Default My Tune - 15-02-2011, 10:29 PM

So i been makin music now for a few months.... started wen i got my mac at xmas.

when people start out they make ringtones for tunes, i personaly think for this short a period im smashin it... but i could be DRASTICALLY WRONG

so anyone into dance music have a listen to this i made, still gonna do some dynamics and bits but its primarily the track. let me know honestly what u think & JAZ i would appreciate any production tips mate

http://soundcloud.com/m3-mi/track-for-college


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Default 16-02-2011, 02:32 AM

Not bad. Have you learnt side-chain compression yet? It's the key to getting a punchy base/snare in dance music - Here's a good example: YouTube - & Down - Boys Noize (compressed to shit, punchy as fuck)

Also. It is so important to master your mix, I can tell you haven't done that as it's quite flat.

Get some tutorials on these aspects and you will be sound.

What plugins are you using?
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Default 16-02-2011, 07:10 AM

ive sidechained the base & the main melody, bass on the offbeat tho so its kinda doin nothin anyway. wer doin mixin in college tonight so hopefully should pick some tips up.

Cheers jaz... ill get its back up once its mixed

ive only used logics plugins... nothin outside.

dont wanna start gearslutin it yet.. i am gonna buy a hardware virus t synth tho

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Default 16-02-2011, 09:49 AM

Page appears to be down mate?

My cousin is at music college and is big into remixing shite songs into some pretty decent D'n'B / Dubstep / Drumstep tunes... for example, his latest - Spice Girls - Wannabe (Joe Bird Remix) by Joe Bird on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Wouldn't have a clue where to start outside of fruity loops myself. I have big respect for people who can put this kind of stuff together


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Default 16-02-2011, 11:47 AM

college track by m3-mi on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Here jaz, played with the levels & compression!!

any better?


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Default 16-02-2011, 07:13 PM

Phil,

I can't get on that site and want to hear your shit. Sort me out.


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Default 16-02-2011, 09:33 PM

Try playing around with the velocity. It makes it sound more free and less processed. Don't really know that type of music but could work well on the claps.


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Default 16-02-2011, 11:32 PM

Better. It's getting there. I cant stand the sound of General MIDI tho, was that some of the percussion used?
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Default 16-02-2011, 11:53 PM

i dunno what u just said BUT... in college the tutor re vamped it, stripped the bass down, aded more melody layers, showed me where i went wrong etc... sounded SICK

ill upload it wen i get a min.

so im gonna take the original strip all compression eq etc and re mix & play again.

ill get there mate.


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Default 20-02-2011, 10:06 PM

Re edit track1 by m3-mi on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

ok this is practically done, just need a bit more sub under the kick!! well more depth

enjoy

let me know what ya think


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